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Post  Beckaox on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:28 pm

Hahaha Anoo
Itt Couldd Goo On & Onn Hahaha Razz x
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Post  Gigi on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:30 pm

lol

Maybe Team seth? Wink
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Post  Beckaox on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:34 pm

Hahahha
Maybee Wink Razz xx
Teamm Carlislee Smile x

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Post  Gigi on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:37 pm

Im so there!


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Post  Beckaox on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:39 pm

Hahahhaa
Doess Sounddd Ratherr Good Razz
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Post  Gigi on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:41 pm

Wait till sami gets on, shell be team carlisle 2
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Post  Beckaox on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:43 pm

Hahahaha
Bestt Startt Makinn Team Carlisle Bagss & T-Shirtss Nowww Hahahha xx
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Kellan!!!

Post  Gigi on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:50 pm

OMG u nearly made me get off a bus and shout in someones face
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Post  Beckaox on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:53 pm

Hahahahha Razz
Youu Should Off Very Happy x

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Post  Gigi on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:56 pm

I was goin past a pub on the bus and there was this dude who looked EXACTLY like kellan n i was like OMG!!! So i thaught of getting off and screaming, then i thaught not to, so if it was kellan, I should kick myself right abt now
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Post  Beckaox on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:58 pm

Omggg !!!
I Wouldd Off Anyway
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Post  Gigi on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:59 pm

Nah it was like 6 hours agoo
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Post  Beckaox on Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:03 am

Arrrr Hahaha Razz x

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Lawl

Post  Gigi on Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:07 am

Im gna blame Kellan now for my mental problems XD

(I dnt actually have any)
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Post  Beckaox on Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:09 am

Hahaha
Blamee Himm Forr Nufenn Then Razz
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Post  Gigi on Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:14 am

Nah fine then mental problems later in life
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Post  Cullen on Mon Mar 23, 2009 1:17 am

seirously i hope ashley whacks kellan upside his head
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Post  spunkie_tomboy.sarah on Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:53 am

man this is really good! is this fic done??? im really loving it thnx kellan Smile
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Post  Kellan on Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:42 pm


Chapter 6 (Jacob’s POV)

“Shit. Shit. Shit. SHIT!!!! You are such an idiot Jake!” I thought to myself. “How could you let her go home by herself?!? Edward warned you that the Lead bloodsuckers wanted to see her again. Hell, even Alice had suspensions that they may send someone along and she can’t even see Nessie! Shit. Shit. Shit.”

“Stop beating yourself up Jake. We’ll get her back.” Edward said with determination. I stared at him. Is he crazy now?

“No not crazy, we will get her back.” Edward said. I stared at him, suspiciously. Then glanced around at all the vampires and werewolves gathered together in the living room.

“When you say we…who do you mean exactly?” When Edward hesitated I knew I was correct.

“Oh hell no, I’m coming with you guys. It’s my fault that she got captured; now I’m going to help get her back. “Rosalie jumped up from the couch and was in my face, pissed off.

“It WAS your fault dog! If you just listened to us when we warned you that they were coming! But did you listen? NO! Now we have to go to the Volteri and get her ourselves, just to fix YOUR mistake.”

“Rosalie, calm down.” Carlisle snapped. We all looked at him, surprised. He looked just as surprised as the rest of us. He sighed, “I’m sorry Rosalie. I didn’t mean to snap at you.”

“It’s ok.” Rosalie said quietly, obviously hurt. Emmett took her hand and led her back to the couch. We all awkwardly looked at one another. I looked at Edward.

“Has he ever snapped at anyone before?” Edward did a very subtle shake of his head. Wow. I glanced at everyone, but kept my gaze on Bella.

“I’m sorry everyone. I should have watched out for her better.” A new thought occurred to me though. “She didn’t even scream. How would they have gotten her out without a sound, or even a scent?”

“I don’t know!” Edward thought about it. Everyone looked at him, slightly pissed off.

“What?” Alice asked.

“Jake thought of something.” Edward explained. Why does he always say I thought of it? He was the one that picked it out of my head. He grinned slightly then sobered up. He continued, “How did they get Nessie away without a sound or a scent? Nessie is very loud when she wants to be.”

They all just sat there, stumped. Then Bella spoke up for the first time during this conversation.

“How do we know there is no scent?” We all looked at each other and booked it outside. I phased so I could keep up with them, and so I can use my nose.

I led the way to the last spot I saw Renessemee. I sniffed the air and barked in surprise. I glanced at Edward.
“She wasn’t even that far away from me!” Edward nodded and everyone looked like they came to that same conclusion. Rosalie snorted and we all glanced at her. Well, mine was more of a glare.

“You didn’t even smell a vampire?!?! What type of protector are you?” Rosalie started to laugh meanly. I jumped into the bushes and phased. As I came back to them I said to Rosalie,

“What do you see when you look into a blonde's eyes? “ She glared at me. I smiled and continued, “The back of her head! Have you heard that one?”

“No.” Rosalie said curtly. I grinned.

“I’m getting better with the blonde jokes then aren’t I?

“No, you just finally learned how to use a computer.” She sneered. I was about to comment when I took a deep breath. I felt a pain in my chest when I smelt Nessie’s scent, even though it was a few hours old. I took another deep breath and continued.

“Wow Rosalie. Glad you don’t seem to care that Nessie is missing at all.” Rosalie hissed and probably would have jumped if Edward’s voice hadn’t stopped her.

“If you guys grew up for a moment you would have realized that Nessie wasn’t attacked, and she wasn't moved for awhile either.”

“What?!?!” Rosalie and I said in unison.


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Post  Gigi on Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:50 pm

Jacobs P.O.V?
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Post  Gigi on Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:51 pm

Kellan wrote:
Chapter 6 (Jacob’s POV)

“Shit. Shit. Shit. SHIT!!!! You are such an idiot Jake!” I thought to myself. “How could you let her go home by herself?!? Edward warned you that the Lead bloodsuckers wanted to see her again. Hell, even Alice had suspensions that they may send someone along and she can’t even see Nessie! Shit. Shit. Shit.”

“Stop beating yourself up Jake. We’ll get her back.” Edward said with determination. I stared at him. Is he crazy now?

“No not crazy, we will get her back.” Edward said. I stared at him, suspiciously. Then glanced around at all the vampires and werewolves gathered together in the living room.

“When you say we…who do you mean exactly?” When Edward hesitated I knew I was correct.

“Oh hell no, I’m coming with you guys. It’s my fault that she got captured; now I’m going to help get her back. “Rosalie jumped up from the couch and was in my face, pissed off.

“It WAS your fault dog! If you just listened to us when we warned you that they were coming! But did you listen? NO! Now we have to go to the Volteri and get her ourselves, just to fix YOUR mistake.”

“Rosalie, calm down.” Carlisle snapped. We all looked at him, surprised. He looked just as surprised as the rest of us. He sighed, “I’m sorry Rosalie. I didn’t mean to snap at you.”

“It’s ok.” Rosalie said quietly, obviously hurt. Emmett took her hand and led her back to the couch. We all awkwardly looked at one another. I looked at Edward.

“Has he ever snapped at anyone before?” Edward did a very subtle shake of his head. Wow. I glanced at everyone, but kept my gaze on Bella.

“I’m sorry everyone. I should have watched out for her better.” A new thought occurred to me though. “She didn’t even scream. How would they have gotten her out without a sound, or even a scent?”

“I don’t know!” Edward thought about it. Everyone looked at him, slightly pissed off.

“What?” Alice asked.

“Jake thought of something.” Edward explained. Why does he always say I thought of it? He was the one that picked it out of my head. He grinned slightly then sobered up. He continued, “How did they get Nessie away without a sound or a scent? Nessie is very loud when she wants to be.”

They all just sat there, stumped. Then Bella spoke up for the first time during this conversation.

“How do we know there is no scent?” We all looked at each other and booked it outside. I phased so I could keep up with them, and so I can use my nose.

I led the way to the last spot I saw Renessemee. I sniffed the air and barked in surprise. I glanced at Edward.
“She wasn’t even that far away from me!” Edward nodded and everyone looked like they came to that same conclusion. Rosalie snorted and we all glanced at her. Well, mine was more of a glare.

“You didn’t even smell a vampire?!?! What type of protector are you?” Rosalie started to laugh meanly. I jumped into the bushes and phased. As I came back to them I said to Rosalie,

“What do you see when you look into a blonde's eyes? “ She glared at me. I smiled and continued, “The back of her head! Have you heard that one?”

“No.” Rosalie said curtly. I grinned.

“I’m getting better with the blonde jokes then aren’t I?

“No, you just finally learned how to use a computer.” She sneered. I was about to comment when I took a deep breath. I felt a pain in my chest when I smelt Nessie’s scent, even though it was a few hours old. I took another deep breath and continued.

“Wow Rosalie. Glad you don’t seem to care that Nessie is missing at all.” Rosalie hissed and probably would have jumped if Edward’s voice hadn’t stopped her.

“If you guys grew up for a moment you would have realized that Nessie wasn’t attacked, and she wasn't moved for awhile either.”

“What?!?!” Rosalie and I said in unison.


Uh yeah sorry thick moment :S
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Post  Kellan on Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:05 am

Chapter 7 (Nessie’s POV)

Mira waited until we got to my room and sat down before she turned and looked at me, excitement shining through her crimson eyes.

“How did you do that? That was hilarious!” Mira asked. I blushed and silently cursed mom for giving me the blushing genes.

“Oh that. That’s my power.” I said casually.

“How did you get that type of power? I’ve never seen anything like!” She proclaimed.

“My family thinks I reversed my parents’ powers. My dad can read minds and my mom is a mental shield. So they think I took both of their powers and flipped them inside out.” I explained. She pondered on that for a minute or so. Then she glanced at me, mischievously.

“Can you do that again?” she asked. I nodded and placed my hand on her shoulder. I showed her my family. It took a few minutes until I showed her them all in full detail, showing Jacob last. Once I was done I took my hand off her shoulder. She looked at me sadly, with a hint of regret.

“You miss them don’t you? But Jacob is so cute!” She exclaimed. I smiled at her and nodded in agreement. She continued, “But that was amazing! I feel like I’ve known your family for years! Do you need to use your hand to send out the pictures?”

“Yeah, but when I was younger I could only send the pictures if I was touching their face. Now, as you well know now, I can send them if I’m just simply touching them.” She was studying me and then she lit up like a light bulb just turned on in her head. I eyed her suspiciously. “What?”

“Well think about this. Both your parents can project their powers. I wonder if you can too.” She wondered out loud. I glanced at her, surprised.

“That’s brilliant thinking Mira. I wonder why no one else thought of it!” She smiled.

“Thanks! It just came to me.” She said modestly. “We will have to try and get you to project! Then you would have mega power!” She starts laughing and I have a thought.

“Mira, how does your power work?”

“Well I’m not too sure. I can make anyone fall asleep.” She replied. I frowned.

“Mira, more specifics.” I said. She smiled.

“Alright, what I mean is that it doesn’t matter who it is, supernatural or natural. I can make anyone fall asleep. Usually I just have to do it mentally, but when it comes to shields I have to injure them from the inside out.” I widened my eyes.

“What do you mean injure them?”

“Usually it gives the person the illusion of sleep. I can give them dreams but they can’t wake themselves up.”

“You…can…give…them….dreams?” I interrupted, baffled.

“Sure.” Mira grinned at my expression. “It’s kind of like your power. I just imagine what they’re dreaming about when I put them to sleep. “

I had to think about that for a second. Then I continued on my previous question. “That’s cool. But how do you make shields sleep?”

“Well I can’t knock them out just by hitting them right? I couldn’t get through their skin. So I can go inside their brain and knock them out from the inside.”

“How would that even work?”

“I don’t know. I’ve only did it to one person and that was because I was too pissed off at him to give him sleep. So I tried making him sleep permanently. Except all it did was he woke up with a little bit of a headache and really bad nightmares. He ran away before I could ask him what happened.” Mira mused.

“I wonder what would happen to Mom?” I wondered out loud. Mira gasped in delight.

“Do you think Bella would let me do that?” Before I could say anything she answered herself. “I guess its Edward I’d have to worry about right?”

I smiled. She really understood everything about my family. “Right.” Mira stood up so quickly that I couldn’t help but be surprised.

“I’ll be back in a few days ok?” She said excitedly. I stared at her, shocked. “No one will harm you and I’ll say hi to your family for you alright?”

“Wait Mira—“I started to say. But she was gone.
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Post  Cullen on Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:06 am

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Post  Beckaox on Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:16 am

Postt Moreee Kellann Very Happy <3 ox

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Post  Gigi on Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:18 am

I agree Beka XD
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